you need not
grind your
sentenceto a point
omit needless words?
i say, include
all mood-makers
generalize, but provide
examples that convey
your unsharpened point
use denotation and
connotation in your
dance of beauty.
sweeten your images,
including improbable pairs--
see the noise.
hear the darkness.
touch the smell.
taste the caress.
smell the presence
of your master,
your inner demon
--by resc1440