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Oh like pedagogy you mean

Call:
I went to this place in this park
at night it’s exceedingly dark
See I like to go hunting
for animals grunting
But what I really want is a shark.

Response:
First line sets just the right scene
for something that is or has been.
It’s good but what’s missing
Besides reference to kissing
Is the punchline that doesn’t exist.

Editorial Addendum - From the Ombudsman

Attention has come to be paid
To a problem with what's above said,
The reception lukewarm,
Had to do with its form
and the lack of softlinking in bed

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