in order:  Throat, gum, sugar, blood, sun

 

they were listed this way on his notepad,

as he walked around the victim

 

he listed all of the things he noticed

the things other people missed because they weren't looking 

 

the girl was lying in a field

clear as day,  cold and stiff 

 

throat (cut, longways, which was different)

gum  (some sort of pink bubblegum, probably) 

sugar  (specks of it in the corner of her mouth, why ?)

blood   (a pool of it, due to several stab wounds)

sun   (why leave her out in a field with so many trees nearby?)

 

in order

 

the detective made notes to himself

it would help him organize his thoughts later, when he was by himself

 

 

 

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