Let me begin by emphasizing that I would welcome all criticisms and suggestions. Even if you are like "This bored me to tears" or "None of your ideas make sense." Those comments would be like nuggets of gold to me, should you be kind enough to bestow them. Who knows. I see a lot of mean softlinking going on, glancing around the place. That sort of ambiguous criticism isn't very helpful.
The real reason I'm here, though, is to figure out how to write better. Straight up. I've been writing for a long time, but I filled my writings with sarcasm, or I gave up too quickly on long projects. Now I am overwhelmed by the desire to move on, to do it right.